literature

china white

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Published: Jul 22, 2012

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Literature Text

_{hello heaven i. today you walked away, leaving behind a trail of tears and paroxysm and agony. however, you were happy you selfishly crushed my tiny, fragile enzymes for your own delectation, and used them to flavour your greed while you leave me in the damp pit of laceration and you smile don't forget to shut the door on your way out ii. it's been fours years since you gave me sixteen days of ecstasy and euphoria but now you have given me nothing but desolate heart ache why don't you stop by and say 'hello' once in a never i can't let you go in my head iii. two decades ago, you venerated me but now you hate my tiny heart however, i still smoke your hairs in my room, leaving the scent of your bliss on my sheets i still have your strobe lights iv. good night honey i'll sleep well i hope}

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UraminoWaltz

Feb 24, 2013

^{this is gon be real weird but
this poem hits a really personal sting on me
like i won't detail it, but i feel like i can relate and stuff. fff
and i love your writing already, like loads, but this one just
i
guh ; ; makes my heart ache just a tiny bit. maybe that's the intention. guhhh.

but uhm
would you mind if i like, used it for a doll someday? like one of the more personal ones and all ffff
it's too beautiful for me to just let it sit as "i can relate i will read it everyday" and all. i'll totally let it be known it's yours, though. this is a weird question. :'l}